Extension to the film

After reviewing the footage and using the best parts, I found it wasn't enough to constitute around 5 minutes of footage, I would have had to use lesser quality footage to 'pad' it out which for me isn't good enough, so I have decided to film more and add some more story on with this new footage to add a sense of interest to audience because they will see that it is part of a much bigger plan being carried out across many different areas of crime.

Currently I don't have shots because I still looking for a suitable location to film in but I do have a rough idea of the kind of shots and props I will need.
The new shots take place, of course at the end after the phone.

From the shot of the phone call inside the car it will go black for a moment and lead onto where
we see the front of the person with just his mouth showing with the phone next it listening to the message left in the previous shot. His mouth will be straight and without expression to signify now tough and powerful he his as he no longer gets excited by these kind of details, he just expects them now.

The next shot will be from his perspective of him clicking off the phone call and putting on the desk. We then see him reach to side of the phone and pick a red pencil with the same hand and lift it up to show that he wants to use it.

We then cut a extreme close up of two images on a pin board, both pictures are of the two men who were gunned down previously with a name tag below, names yet to be decided. However we only the see the top part of each one of the images with the pencil appearing and crossing through their face from the top to bottom to reveal their name below, this will repeat on the second image.
We then see the pencil follow a piece of string that has been pinned on next to their images, the pencil will follow it down in a slow, dramatic style as if the person is savouring this victory for his 'business'. The string ends a pinned on piece of text with a custom company name on and saying something like 'acquire' or 'buy'. The character will then proceed to circle it a couple of time and dot with the pencil on the text that isn't the business name.

We then get a short shot of him putting the tip of the pencil in his mouth as if he pondering something about this, like the first shot we will only see his mouth to hide who he is.

Then we get a shot of him putting the pencil down by his side and starting to take a step back.

It then goes to a shot of the pin board from the centre and it panning out to reveal the full extent of his plans, you will be able to see the one he has outlined somewhere on the board, this is done to reveal the full extent of his plans and what it will all lead to. When the whole thing is in shot, the camera will pause for a few moments to let the board sink in with the audience so they can appreciate the scale of this crime empire! This is also the basics for the menu screen that would let the online viewer click to other sections of the plan and watch them unfold and see how it will devolpe...

Finally there is a shot of him picking up the phone again but this time from a side shot from the tables perspective, he will pick it up and when the phone is no longer in the shot it will move to the shot from his persecptive of him chosing the person to call from his contacts which reveals a bit more about his business partners and friends till he stops on the one he needs (name to be worked out) then he will click on it and reach up with it and when it is out of shot on the side of his face it will move to the shot of the side of his face with the phone obscuring any details that would give away his identity to the audience, he will then say something like 'time to make that purchase Nikoli' or 'buy out the shares and begin aquisition'.
It will cut black and after a short pause the credits will start with possibly a fake news report saying the remains of two men have been found dead in what has been called a possbile suicide in their home and then the credits will start to roll...